It's good that you've included pictures of what the band will look like but I still don't know what the video will look like and the type of narrative element that you're thinking of using.
Lads, I think that this is a fairly good pitch. I know that you are going to be filming outdoors, you could maybe specify whereabouts and I also know that you will be filming it in a studio. I like that you have included pictures as well. Very good.
I think the pitch lacks in detail and also think the idea to film outside could cause your video to lose depth and cause it to look washed out. There just needs to be more detail then there is at the moment.
After watching this video, I feel as if I have gained a clear understanding of what your music video will look like, due to the fact that you have included information about the song, the audience you are aiming the video at and the narrative element you have chosen. However, the location of where you are going to film your video is fairly unclear.
This pitch is not of the required standard. I have no idea what so ever about the video you are making because this pitch is so vague.
ReplyDeleteA pitch should clearly state what you are making. Start again.
It's good that you've included pictures of what the band will look like but I still don't know what the video will look like and the type of narrative element that you're thinking of using.
ReplyDeleteLads, I think that this is a fairly good pitch. I know that you are going to be filming outdoors, you could maybe specify whereabouts and I also know that you will be filming it in a studio. I like that you have included pictures as well. Very good.
ReplyDeleteI think the pitch lacks in detail and also think the idea to film outside could cause your video to lose depth and cause it to look washed out. There just needs to be more detail then there is at the moment.
ReplyDeleteAfter watching this video, I feel as if I have gained a clear understanding of what your music video will look like, due to the fact that you have included information about the song, the audience you are aiming the video at and the narrative element you have chosen. However, the location of where you are going to film your video is fairly unclear.
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