I prefer your draft advert because the images draws me in a bit more than the final, however I like the layout and font on the final advert. I like the images on both digipaks but I prefer the ones on the final draft because of the blurred surroundings and focus on the lego man. However I think that the back panel could be improved by moving the text around to balance the thirds out. The fact that there are two blank squares because it keeps it more simple. Well done
I agree with Bronte's comment as the images are more striking in your draft. However the final version has a much better font style and colour as it looks a lot more fitting and keeps to the overall colour scheme of the poster/digipak. The blank pages cause an imbalance on your digipak and I feel there needs to be an image or something there to improve it. Good work pal.
Agreeing with the two previous comments but only on the advert as, because it covers the whole poster and is much brighter in colour, it is more striking and eye catching to the audience. I like how all the pictures are different on each cover so it adds variety to the album and makes it more interesting and as well as that, the fact that they are your own pictures. Also, the improvement from the draft to the final product is the font as it is much better looking and fits in with the genre much better. There just needs to be a bit more colour on the digipak to fill in the blank spots as i feel as it is a bit too plain for the inside of the album. Try adding the lyrics to the songs or short biographies to fill the gaps and make it look fuller.
I prefer your draft advert because the images draws me in a bit more than the final, however I like the layout and font on the final advert. I like the images on both digipaks but I prefer the ones on the final draft because of the blurred surroundings and focus on the lego man. However I think that the back panel could be improved by moving the text around to balance the thirds out. The fact that there are two blank squares because it keeps it more simple. Well done
ReplyDeleteI agree with Bronte's comment as the images are more striking in your draft. However the final version has a much better font style and colour as it looks a lot more fitting and keeps to the overall colour scheme of the poster/digipak. The blank pages cause an imbalance on your digipak and I feel there needs to be an image or something there to improve it. Good work pal.
ReplyDeleteAgreeing with the two previous comments but only on the advert as, because it covers the whole poster and is much brighter in colour, it is more striking and eye catching to the audience. I like how all the pictures are different on each cover so it adds variety to the album and makes it more interesting and as well as that, the fact that they are your own pictures.
ReplyDeleteAlso, the improvement from the draft to the final product is the font as it is much better looking and fits in with the genre much better.
There just needs to be a bit more colour on the digipak to fill in the blank spots as i feel as it is a bit too plain for the inside of the album. Try adding the lyrics to the songs or short biographies to fill the gaps and make it look fuller.