After receiving this feedback from our teacher on our first drat of the 25 Word Pitch I could see where we had gone wrong after looking at other pitches. Also, after overlooking the pitch that I had made I could understand that the point I wanted to make wasn't coming across very well. So, after looking at other pitches and asking advise from the teacher we, as a group, decided to start all over on different software and to put across our idea much better and clearer for other people viewing it to understand.
Boys, well done. You've really begun to turn this round. Everyone now seems to be playing a more equal role in the group, you're building in reflection to your posts so Mr Ford and I can see your thought process.
ReplyDeleteTo move towards the C we still need EVERYONES summer work uploading. Once that is done we can look at moving towards a B
Reflection is key for a B grade, on every post try and include a sentence which does the following
outlines what you have learnt
discusses what you could use in your own video
evaluates what you cannot use in your own video (because of time, cost, skills, suitability etc)
set targets for what must be done next.
I agree with everything Mr Smith has said.
ReplyDeleteYou need to go all out now and work as hard as possible. Make sure you are posting at least once each everyday.
Not every post needs to be massively detailed but everything must have a clear link to the creative process.
A number of existing posts need to be added to:
Band name/bio-add images of band
Audience profile-add more images and include pictures of females
Mood board-it isn't really detailed enough. Mood boards usually include lots of images
Band photos-you only have four-you need more than that